相信这些建议或多或少大家都看过。里面我觉得最好的是那个跟别人描述你的产品的模版:
For (target customer)
Who (statement of need or opportunity),
(Product name) is a (product category)
That (statement of key benefit).
Unlike (competing alternative)
(Product name)(statement of primary differentiation).
具体例子:
For World Wide Web users who enjoy books,
Amazon is a retail bookseller.
that provides instant access to over 1.1 million books.
Unlike traditional book retailers,
Amazon provides a combination of extraordinary convenience,
low prices and comprehensive selection.